Thursday, June 13, 2013

IWP Poems



Childhood-Adulthood
Run
 Play
Live life
No worries child
You can be wild


                   Laugh
                   Text
                   Have fun
                   No worries teen
                   You’re only fourteen
           

Work
Family
Never give up
No worries adult
There’s always a good result



Growing up

I want to be
Ambitious,
Bright
And
Creative

I want to be
Determined
Enthusiastic
And
Fearless

I want to be
Generous
Helpful
And
Independent

I want to be
Kind
Loving
And
Marvelous

I want to be
Nice
Optimistic
And
Patient

I want to be
Quick-witted
Reliable
And
Sincere

I want to be thoughtful
Understanding
And
Valuable

I want to be
Witty
And xtra-ordinary even though that doesn’t start with an x

I want to be youthful
And Zany

I want to be all of these things

I want to be all of them before my end of time comes.

Thursday, May 16, 2013

Edited Romeo and Juliet Essay


"My only love sprung from my only hate!" said Juliet from the play Romeo and Juliet by William Shakespeare, after she found out that her love was a Montague. The Capulet’s' only enemy. The Capulets' and Montagues' carried this grudge of hatred for a very long time. In Romeo and Juliet, Juliet changes a lot for Romeo. Juliet changes from not being that interested into Romeo, to committing suicide for him. 

Another way Juliet changes throughout Romeo and Juliet was when she matured and starting making her own choices. In the beginning of Romeo and Juliet, Juliet isn't very interested into getting married at such a young age. At the age of 13, Juliet is still pure and innocent. When Lady Capulet mentions marriage to Juliet, she says: “It is an honor I dream not of.” (Act 1 Scene 3 L71). When her mother tells her she wants her to marry Paris, Juliet takes what her mother wants to consideration and says she'll make herself love him if she had to. This is a further indication of how Juliet is a dutiful, dependent girl, because she does what her mother says. She respects her mother, even though she isn't even a real mother to her, and the nurse is more of one. Once Juliet falls in love with Romeo, she makes her own choices. For example, marrying and loving Romeo was a big choice and decision to make, because she disregarded what her parents wanted and whom they wanted her to marry (Paris). Making such huge decisions by herself also shows her maturity and independence.

In the middle of Romeo and Juliet, there is more change in her personality. She meets Romeo at the Capulet Mansion for a party. The next day, they get married. The only people who know about their marriage were Friar Lawrence and the nurse. That same day, Romeo kills Tybalt and is banished from Verona. After all this happens, her dad starts yelling at her because she will not marry Paris. This shows a change because Juliet changes from a girl who was once shy and innocent; to a girl who starts to not listen to what her parents want. Juliet also changes in the middle because she disregards what her dad says and when her dad ordered her that she would be wed to Paris on the upcoming Thursday, she said she wouldn't, and that she didn't want to. Juliet changed because she stood up to her parents. This is a newer version of Juliet.

In the end of the play, Juliet has already gone through so much. Her dad is yelling at her for not wanting to marry Paris. Then, the next day, she goes to her dad and tells him that she has done wrong to argue against him and that she is sorry. Juliet says this, but by no means, actually means it. Juliet takes a sleeping potion. Once Romeo sees Juliet "dead" and not answering her, he commits suicide. When Juliet wakes up and sees he's dead, she also kills herself. Juliet changes in many ways throughout Romeo and Juliet. She fell in love and found someone she realized she couldn't live without. The old Juliet would laugh of the idea of killing yourself for a man; especially a Montague. The Juliet Romeo knows would do anything for her one and only love.

From the beginning to the end of Romeo and Juliet, Juliet goes from obeying her parents to completely disregarding them, making her own decisions, and becoming a independent young lady. Outside of this play, it is possible for one's personalities to change. Juliet changes in a variety of ways. She changed into a fearless, spoken, young lady. All of these things she once was, changed once Juliet fell in love with Romeo. She didn't go with her head, instead her heart. This meaning even though marrying Paris was the right thing to do in everyone's minds, she knew in her heart that she belonged to and loved Romeo, a Capulet or not. That is how Juliet changes throughout the play, Romeo and Juliet.

Tuesday, April 30, 2013

Romeo and Juliet Literary Essay


"My only love sprung from my only hate!" once said Juliet from the play Romeo and Juliet by William Shakespeare, after she found out that her love was a Montague. The Capulet’s' only hate. The Capulets' and Montagues' carried this grudge of hatred for a very long time. Romeo and Juliet loving each other was forbidden, but love isn't something one can control. Juliet changes from not being that interested to this Montague by the name of Romeo, to committing suicide for him. 

In the beginning of Romeo and Juliet, Juliet isn't very interested into getting married at such a young age. At the age of 13, Juliet is still pure and innocent. When Lady Capulet mentions marriage to Juliet, she says: “It is an honor I dream not of.” (Act 1 Scene 3 L71). When her mother tells her she wants her to marry Paris, Juliet takes what her mother wants to consideration and says she'll make herself love him if she had to. This is a further indication of how Juliet is a dutiful, dependent girl, because she does what her mother says. She respects her mother, even though she isn't even a real mother to her, and the nurse is more of one. In the beginning, Juliet has a good relationship with her parents. This relationship changes once she is married to Romeo because that was when she started to disobey what her parents wanted, and started doing what she wanted with her love life.

In the middle of Romeo and Juliet, there is some change in Juliet. She meets Romeo at the Capulet Mansion for a party. The next day, they get married. The only people who know about their marriage were Friar Lawrence and the nurse. That same day, Romeo kills Tybalt and is banished from Verona. After all this happens, her dad starts yelling at her because she will not marry Paris. This shows a change because Juliet changes from a girl who was once shy and innocent, to a girl who matured and starting making her own choices. Choices such as marrying Romeo. Juliet also changes in the middle because she disregards what her dad says and when her dad ordered her that she would be wed to Paris on the upcoming Thursday, she said she wouldn't, and that she didn't want to. Juliet changed because she stood up to her parents.


In the end of the play, Juliet is disregarding of what her parents say. Her dad is yelling at her for not wanting to marry Paris. Then, the next day, she goes to her dad and tells him that she has done wrong to argue against him and that she is sorry. Juliet says this, but by no means, actually means it. Following the argument, she and the nurse talk, and the nurse advises Juliet to marry Paris. After this, Juliet feels hurt inside because now she can only trust the friar and Romeo. This is a moment of change at heart. Juliet thought of the nurse as her own mother. The nurse agreeing with her parents doesn't help because now, Juliet feels like she has no women she can turn to. Also, in the end, Juliet takes a sleeping potion. Once Romeo sees Juliet "dead" and not answering her, he commits suicide. When Juliet wakes up and sees he's dead, she also kills herself. Juliet changes in many ways throughout Romeo and Juliet. She fell in love and found someone she realized she couldn't live without. 

From the beginning to the end of Romeo and Juliet, Juliet goes from obeying her parents to completely disregarding them. Outside of this play, it is possible for one's personalities to change. Juliet changes in a variety of ways. She changed into a fearless, spoken, young lady. All of these things she once was, changed once Juliet fell in love with Romeo. Loving someone isn't something one can control, and Juliet didn't bother to try to control it. She didn't go with her head, instead her heart. This meaning even though marrying Paris was the right thing to do in everyone's minds, she knew in her heart that she belonged to and loved Romeo, a Capulet or not. That is how Juliet changes throughout the play, Romeo and Juliet.

Wednesday, April 24, 2013

Romeo and Juliet: Thesis & Outline

Thesis: In Romeo and Juliet, Juliet changes and develops throughout the story.

Outline:

Beginning-Juliet isn't that interested into marriage at such a young age. She also has a good relationship with her parents.
First body: Show how Juliet's emotions change from "not that interested" into Romeo, to "in love" with Romeo. (Act 1 Scene 5, lines 104-123)

Middle: Juliet's point of view changes. Want's to marry Romeo. She falls more in love with him and the two get married.
Second body: Show how she changes from a shy, young girl, to a romantic independent witty, young lady.

End: Juliet disobeys what her father wants. Romeo and Juliet realize they can't live without each other and both commit suicide.
Third body: Show how Juliet listened to what her parents had to say in the beginning, and how at the end she disregards what they wanted. (Act 1 Scene 4, lines 103-105)

Wednesday, April 17, 2013

Reading Response: The Lying Game

 I am currently reading The Lying Game by Sarah Shepard. I first decided to read this book because I've started watching the show. People normally say the books are better than the show/movie, and so far, I agree. The Lying Game is about a girl named Emma Paxton who lives with her foster family in the outskirts of Las Vegas. Emma discovers a girl that looks exactly like her from her foster brother Travis, who tells Clarice, their foster parent about it. When Emma is kicked out of her foster home, she has nowhere to go. She starts looking up this "Sutton Mercer" girl who is identical to her. Could this be a long-lost sister? This Sutton Mercer supposably lives in Arizona and is very wealthy. Emma and Sutton were identical in every single possible way. You could barley tell a difference.


Once Emma discovers videos on Youtube of Sutton, hearing her voice made her shriver. Her voice was so familiar. It was like hearing her own voice on video. Emma is positive this is her twin sister. Same looks, birthday, the only thing that wasn't the same was their lives. Emma couldn't wait. She immediately messages Sutton from Facebook. Once Sutton messages her back she was too afraid to read it. "Of course, there was one problem with that note: I didn't write it." -Emma.

Wednesday, March 20, 2013

Reading Response: Deenie by Judy Blume

           In the book Deenie, by Judy Blume, everyone is always telling Deenie how she's pretty, how she could be a model, and how she had the beauty and her sister has the brains. Deenie doesn't necessarily disagree with this until she finds out she has to were a brace. Deenie has scoliosis. Even though Deenie was really upset, I think her mom was more upset than she was.

             I think that Deenie's mom cared more than she did about having a brace. I think this because I feel like Deenie's mom had her next four planned for her. The next four years were super important if Deenie were to become a model. Now that she has to wear the brace, it would take 4 or more years to get it off. Her mom had big plans for her one day to become a model. Deenie never told her mom that she doesn't want to become a model. She knew it would break her heart. Before Deenie and her mother found out she had to wear a brace, Deenie and her mom went to model agencies . I would also be scared to break one of my parents' hearts if they wanted  me to do something that I didn't want to do. I can definitely relate to Deenie. I think that even after Deenie gets the brace off, she should still do what she wants to do. If the thing she wants to do is modeling, them she should. If she wants to  be something else, she should go after her dream, not her moms dream for her.

           I think Deenie should do whatever she wants to do with her life. I sometimes think that her mom tries to control it too much. Deenie shouldn't always have to do what everyone else hopes and wants her to do. sometimes you just have to go with your head and do whats right for you.

Wednesday, March 6, 2013

Non-Fiction Reading Response: "Bringing Music Back to School"

         I just read an article called "Bringing Music Back to School" by Paul Cothran. This article is  about bringing music back to life. As the author tells the story in first person, he lets you experience every thing he's been through. The author tells the reader every detail to really let them experience it. He explains how he was enrolled in a Catholic private school away from the gang public schools. Cothran was interested in Medical study and such. Soon by 1997, an executive search firm called about a position at the Big Apple Circus in New York. After working there for seven years, then he received his position at the VH1 Save the Music Foundation.  At VH1, they raise  funds to restore instrumental music education programs that were cut because of budget constraints. 
          The co founders of VH1 believe that playing musical instruments helps in academic schoolwork as well. They believe that studying music also helps students develop self-expression and discipline and learn about teamwork. "Since 1997, we have donated more than $49 million worth of instruments to over 1,800 public schools." says Cothran. 
        I think VH1 is doing a great thing by helping so many school and by donating so much. They contribute so much, and its not only money. It's their time, effort, support, work they put into making a great foundation.

Wednesday, February 20, 2013

Reading Response #3 : A New Dawn

Even though my last response was on this same book (A New Dawn), every chapter is written by a different author, which makes each chapter interesting and unique in their own way. The chapter I just finished is by K.A Nuzum. Nuzum does a great job by capturing the readers attention and making them want more. More similes that are compared to real life things, more mystery, more wondering, more Twilight.  Nuzum provides the reader, or in this case myself, with information making you want to believe what you're reading. Information like how Edward is a monster or how Meyer's werewolves aren't the traditional ones you usually here about.

Nuzum includes little details backing up her thoughts. When you first read it, you don't think about it as much as you do after reading about how the fact is true. For example, Nuzum brings up how instead of the werewolves in Twilight being compelled to kill humans, they are compelled to protect them. When reading this, I read it like I already knew this. I've realized that the werewolves of course aren't the type of werewolves that pop in your mind when you hear the word werewolves, but Meyer creates her characters differently than what most people would expect.  Nuzum compares Meyer in this chapter in a very great way. "She has given them the ability to exist in mythic time as monsters and to reclaim their humanity in historic time". I agree with her on this statement. Meyer does something in her books many authors don't do. She does exactly what she wants to do, the way she wants to. I think Meyer doesn't believe in following the rules. If there were a book about how werewolves act around humans, Meyer wouldn't make her werewolves be similar to that, which is why I enjoyed her series. She is different.

Overall, I've liked reading this chapter because of the certain attributes that Nuzum has brought to my attention. When reading this section, I really felt like she was talking to me, the reader. So far, this is my favorite chapter yet!

Wednesday, February 6, 2013

A New Dawn Nonfiction Response #2

       I'm currently reading, A New Dawn, a book  created by a series of different authors writing their thoughts about The Twilight Saga. As me being me, once I read Twilight, I couldn't stop. Each and every author brings up something new to my attention. The smallest details that I never noticed slowly become true.
     In the first chapter I read by Susan Vaught, Vaught wrote about how one of the main characters, Edward Cullen, fits 6/7 of the criteria for being a ssociopath. When reading this, I slowly retraced all of these moments and examples she wrote about of how Edward could possibly be a sociopath. After reading this section, I wasn't upset at all because after all, I'm not a big fan of Edward which is why when I read the blurb, picked this book up. This book really attracted me the most because of the blurb: Is Edward a romantic or a (really hot) sociopath? Why does Alice care so much about celebrating Bella's birthday? Who would you rather date: the guy who thirsts for your blood or the guy who drinks out of the toilet? And after reading this blurb I tried to make my own answers for these questions. After I tried, I realized there isn't much of an right or wrong answer for any of these questions. It really just depends on your thoughts and opinions about each character. As soon as I read more, I starting leaning towards and believing everything this book brought to my attention. Small scenes that happen in the book Twilight. When reading books we don't make assumptions like "Edward could possibly be a sociopath," but when we read books like this, the details form a puzzle of how these things can be true.
      This book brings these details that when we read we should be doing. When reading, we never think about these small details. These small details are what usually matter most. Fan girls of the Twilight Saga Series get into this crazy world of Team Edward or Team Jacob, and like myself, read every book at least 3 times. The thing is, we love the series so much and know so much about these characters, but it seems that we really don't know enough to realize details like these.

Wednesday, January 30, 2013

Nonfiction Reading Response #1


Nonfiction Reading Response

After reading the article "Have Phoebe Prince's Bullies Suffered Enough?" by Jessica Bennett, I've learned how far bullying could sometimes go. Phoebe Price was a 15-year-old girl who hung herself in January 2010. After learning how she hung herself, my heart opened up to her. I can't imagine how her parents and siblings must of felt. If I were them, I would be devastated. "What appear to be the worst of their crimes involved repeated taunts of "whore" and "Irish slut" (Phoebe had immigrated from Ireland); threats to "beat Phoebe up"; and, on the day of her death, a crumpled soda can tossed toward her from the window of a moving car, which left Phoebe in tears (Bennett 1). According to the article "Have Phoebe Prince's Bullies Suffered Enough?,when Phoebe got home that afternoon, she texted a friend: "I can’t do it anymore." At 4:30 p.m., her sister found her body, hanging from the scarf she'd given her for Christmas. (Bennett 1)

I think author wants her readers to think about how serious bullying can really be. Whether it's physical bullying, cyber bullying , or emotional bullying, it's hurtful. Phoebe has suffered the bullying since her freshman year in South Hadley, her high school. According to "Have Phoebe Prince's Bullies Suffered Enough? (Bennett 1), students Ashley Longe and Sharon Velasquez engaged in what then-DA Scheibel described as a "nearly three-month campaign" of verbal assault and physical threats against Phoebe. 

I can understand how much Phoebe was hurt. She was torn apart. Everyone has those horrible days, but she had them everyday for a while. If something is wrong, let someone know. A parent, teacher, friend, or sibling. I think the author wants us readers to truly understand how serious bullying is. Bullying can be taken to a whole other level. Bullying is wrong, hurtful, mean, and even selfish in a way. Selfish because words or hurting someone could lead to making them make choices such as commenting suicide. I think more schools should have stricter rules about bullying. 

This article has changed my view towards bullying. I learned the severity of bullying and how easily it can change someones life. This article has made me  appreciate that I have people I can tell anything to and a safe-friendly school. This reminds me of when I read an article about a girl who committed suicide in 2012. After I read about that I was very sad. Many people commit suicide because of bullying. I think bullying should be stopped. It just takes one person at a time.
Work Cited
Bennett, Jessica. "Have Phoebe Prince's Bullies Suffered Enough?" The Daily Beast. Newsweek/Daily Beast, 06 May 2011. Web. 30 Jan. 2013.